There were many things that I needed to change from my rough draft because I wasn’t completely finished with my essay. My rough draft only had the summaries of the three articles that I chose, which were all about different kinds of phobias. The summaries of the three articles were okay. I just made a few changes in each paragraph to make them flow better. I made some sentences shorter and some longer. I also added some more information that the authors talked about. From paragraph to paragraph, I included a transition sentence to connect them.
In my final draft, I fixed my introduction and added a definition of psychology. I also explained why I chose to write about this topic. I ended my introduction with a thesis that basically states what my essay will talk about.
To wrap up my essay, I ended it with a conclusion. In my conclusion, I restated my thesis and summarized what I wrote in my essay. Also, I talked about what I learned from each essay.
I did not have my work cited page finished in my rough draft. For the work cited page, I cited each article and put them in alphabetical order. That page was the last page of my essay. Everything else looked pretty good. I made sure all my grammar was correct and I came up with a title that fits my essay.
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